Quote from JJ72 :

I thought those are the basics.

Content of the movie has nothing to do with the quality control. (unless the concept of your movie justisfy a deliberate distortion/low fi look, but that's another story)

If you just want to do it to amuse yourself then don't ask for comments.

i don't say that!
only you ever see a crash movie with effects everywhere?
only wants not rude comments
It's only my second movie i ever did

Quote from LFSn00b :

Repeating is the worst crime you could do in video editing... not to mention leaving the virtual rearviewmirror on.

I'll let squidhead do the rest.
don't be easy on him

it's a crash movie...
not a LFS MOVIE THAT NEEDS A MAD EDITING and GREATS CAMERAS

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NK1a8tOcgMg

my 2 video ever pls rate and comment

Quote from LFSn00b :

Horrrible!

The jerky camera effects made it unwatchable. Not to mention that the effects claimed to be good on YT comments, theyre horrible.(as YT comments have always been.) The cockpit view on the FOX has a fatal flaw when you just turn the camera yourself to the crashing car.

Some shots include you pressing shift+f after you've started the clip. the idea is to do the opposite. Besides you still see the timeline below the clips. Some shots also feature shift+f the whole clip. Why?

Also you forgot the mirror on and it ruins the whole video along with the horribly done text effects, and the text has no other effect whatsoever, just the horrid glow. Also normal unedited TV simulator effect and crappy transitions.

Especially hate the part where you failed at doing proper shake effect after horribly changing from pitstop to a finish line. Try newblue effects pack.

You used also too much FOV on the pink FO8.

The pace lap part is also misleading. All you did was show FBM's racing down at lap 1.

The song is also overused. The second is just horrid. Both are also unfitting.

On the last part you also used the TAB button which is a no-no if you are going to do a proper video.

Then comes the text "PODIUM" and suddenly there appears the FZR's, then back to the text and then 3 formulas parked?

Lastly, "THIS IS OSR". Here i finally started breathing and went thankful that the video ended.

Why do you call this a promo? A promo should not include crashing or people will think your server involves a lot of crashing. After watching this I wouldn't enter the server, for sure.

Overall it's another 1/10 with nothing good to provide.
+FPS - atleast it wasnt a movie with max. 0.001fps.

- Effects are horrible - I suggest reading tutorials and buying proper effect packs, not to use normal sony vegas effects.

- Camera work is even worse - Improve camera smoothing in shift+u

- Chat is visible - Open cfg.txt and find "MPR Message block" -line. Put a number "2" after "MPR message block".

- Tyre menu, timeline and HUD is sometimes visible. - Press shift+F 2 times.

- Grammar - Mostly horrible. - Suggesting to finish school before doing videos.

- FOV - few shots had way too much fov.

- TAB button - NEVER use it when you record.

- Music - Try to find a song that fits the theme/tempo a lot.

- Angles - Use interesting angles that provide full coverage of what is happening, never turn off the cars unless you have a proper idea. Never use the look keys on the video either.

for pace lapping the yellow fbm is a pace car...ù

Quote from logitekg25 :

it wasnt too bad at all...he was trying to make the camera movement match the music (right?) and after about 30 seconds it was smooth-ish camera movement

THANKS YOU GUY... the admin will be happy

Quote from morpha :

Then you shouldn't be surprised by the reactions.
Besides, you said it's your "lastest", which means either "last" or "latest", both of which imply there have been others before

you are on the just point

i'm afraid for the error

SORRY ALLL

Quote from LFSn00b :

Horrrible!

The jerky camera effects made it unwatchable. Not to mention that the effects claimed to be good on YT comments, theyre horrible.(as YT comments have always been.) The cockpit view on the FOX has a fatal flaw when you just turn the camera yourself to the crashing car.

Some shots include you pressing shift+f after you've started the clip. the idea is to do the opposite. Besides you still see the timeline below the clips. Some shots also feature shift+f the whole clip. Why?

Also you forgot the mirror on and it ruins the whole video along with the horribly done text effects, and the text has no other effect whatsoever, just the horrid glow. Also normal unedited TV simulator effect and crappy transitions.

Especially hate the part where you failed at doing proper shake effect after horribly changing from pitstop to a finish line. Try newblue effects pack.

You used also too much FOV on the pink FO8.

The pace lap part is also misleading. All you did was show FBM's racing down at lap 1.

The song is also overused. The second is just horrid. Both are also unfitting.

On the last part you also used the TAB button which is a no-no if you are going to do a proper video.

Then comes the text "PODIUM" and suddenly there appears the FZR's, then back to the text and then 3 formulas parked?

Lastly, "THIS IS OSR". Here i finally started breathing and went thankful that the video ended.

Why do you call this a promo? A promo should not include crashing or people will think your server involves a lot of crashing. After watching this I wouldn't enter the server, for sure.

Overall it's another 1/10 with nothing good to provide.
+FPS - atleast it wasnt a movie with max. 0.001fps.

- Effects are horrible - I suggest reading tutorials and buying proper effect packs, not to use normal sony vegas effects.

- Camera work is even worse - Improve camera smoothing in shift+u

- Chat is visible - Open cfg.txt and find "MPR Message block" -line. Put a number "2" after "MPR message block".

- Tyre menu, timeline and HUD is sometimes visible. - Press shift+F 2 times.

- Grammar - Mostly horrible. - Suggesting to finish school before doing videos.

- FOV - few shots had way too much fov.

- TAB button - NEVER use it when you record.

- Music - Try to find a song that fits the theme/tempo a lot.

- Angles - Use interesting angles that provide full coverage of what is happening, never turn off the cars unless you have a proper idea. Never use the look keys on the video either.

listen "master" this was my first video ok?

HEY GUYS check out my lastest vid

link

it's an advert for the old skool racing servers :]

how to put into the vids?

i need the 2006 nascar chevy highlights