I think it would be technically correct to call this a poem, if not please correct me 
It was written mainly by me with a little bit of help from a friend, with whom I also discussed the idea behind it quite a lot to make sure it is clear all throughout it and does not contradict itself...
I haven't got a clue why I am showing this, but just felt like doing so! So there it is
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It was written mainly by me with a little bit of help from a friend, with whom I also discussed the idea behind it quite a lot to make sure it is clear all throughout it and does not contradict itself...I haven't got a clue why I am showing this, but just felt like doing so! So there it is
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The day you're born in the world of injustice
You realise the path has been traced for you
Decisions have been made
and forced onto you
The choice is yours to stand up and fight
Or take a step back and watch it from aside
Or take a step back and watch it from aside
Don't live to regret the choices you've made
and the chances you'll take
You give it every moment of your life
And you're going to fight day or night
You're not a loser unless you give up
Surrender isn't a word that you're aware of.
Save yourself whilst you can
From the realms of brutality
It's time for you, my friend
To face the reality
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Any feedback is welcome as long as you wont tell me to go to hell or start complaining about me creating a thread for it
Thanks!
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Any feedback is welcome as long as you wont tell me to go to hell or start complaining about me creating a thread for it
Thanks!
