Alright. Not sure whether you want critisicm in how to make your next one a little better but anyway, just a few things.
The choppy fps in the beginning might be something you have to work on, although the fps in the rest of the movie were alright.
I did like the editing and the way you moved the camera, BUT, in your future movies, try not to move the camera through the car(s). Somehow that sort of ruins it.
And last, but not the least, the music. Metallica. Although I am a huge fan of Metallica (I was at their concert in Stockholm 12/7 -07 btw), I don't think their music fits very well in some LFS-movie. And especially not Disbosable heroes. But this is just what I think, the subject "music" is very individual and everyone has their own taste. :]
The choppy fps in the beginning might be something you have to work on, although the fps in the rest of the movie were alright.
I did like the editing and the way you moved the camera, BUT, in your future movies, try not to move the camera through the car(s). Somehow that sort of ruins it.
And last, but not the least, the music. Metallica. Although I am a huge fan of Metallica (I was at their concert in Stockholm 12/7 -07 btw), I don't think their music fits very well in some LFS-movie. And especially not Disbosable heroes. But this is just what I think, the subject "music" is very individual and everyone has their own taste. :]