OK Guys, Here is my first ever LFS movie

3 versions

1) http://www.conedodgers.com/test/cd-promo.wmv 320 x 240 10mb
2) http://www.conedodgers.com/test/cd640.avi 640 x 480 44mb
3) http://www.conedodgers.com/test/cd1024.avi 1024 x 768 66mb

Please be kind but i would like your comments

For a first i think it's pretty good

I agree on sponge's opinion, not a bad first try at all!

in the 1024 x 768 version I noticed a minor bug in the helmet, there's an invisible part for a very short time (around 1:33). it doesn't really bother me but it might be something that you yourself would like to avoid next time, that's why I mentioned it

Quote from Jens O. :

minor bug in the helmet,

Thats not a bug its a feature...............

Thanks

That's pretty decent for a first movie... I really didn't like the text overlays though

Agree with squidhead at all. But anyway, if I would be leader of a team like this, I would pay for some professional video :-). I mean I would choose someone from best movie makers here and would pay him... Spangler would maybe do it for $30, $40. KxR paid him and the result was this.

Quote from birder :

OK Guys, Here is my first ever LFS movie

I think it´s a very good job of you - escecially for a first movie.

Quote from Drift King CZ :

KxR paid him and the result was this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WR4EVq9zVrg Same song. :doh:

Not bad for a first time. I think the overlays and the footage needs some work but that lap was hawt!

Nice video, is it me or is the image quality lower then a lot of the other videos. May just be the PC's capablilities.

Quote from SpikeyMarcoD :

Nice video, is it me or is the image quality lower then a lot of the other videos. May just be the PC's capablilities.

Its not the PC, thats a brand new top of their range Dell XPS720 H2C, so it must be me

And you got full AA/AF etc. Hm am not a moviemaker, but it seems more pixelated.

nice video..

great job..keep it up





ps.
but im supriced squidhead didnt post a 15 step improvmentlist
i see things mentioned in other videos he didnt nag about.

Nice video but I would get rid of the lens flare Unrealistic

great video, but work on the lense flare a bit more, or remove it next time around..

Quote from squad_e :

great video, but work on the lense flare a bit more, or remove it next time around..

Holy Moly, i thought the lens flare was the best bit

lens flare is letting it down bud. good first vid though.

Quote from dadge :

lens flare is letting it down bud. good first vid though.

Yeah, the lens flare was the most incorrectly used effect in the movie. I'd say tone it down just a hair it might work.

but..............it's beter to try something and find out it doesn't work than to not try at all

Well... for a first vid, is good, although those lens... heheh...
It could have a bit of more drama look...and stuff...but it's ok.

Nicely done, birder