I tell you what, if you want some full on criticism without the sugar coating you get from your parents, this is the place to post up your work. Give him a bit of feedback on his paper, but don't crush the poor guys dreams.

Im still gonna try really hard to write this paper, to the best of my ability..

Sounds like DeadWolfBones is the only Nort American who can wright correct on this forum (worries me)

There are a few of us. :P

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Sounds like DeadWolfBones is the only North American who can wright write correctly on this forum :schwitzworries me)

No thanks

Shut Up mr Klump! (j/k)
Well i'm not a UK'er nor am i an American and English isn't my motherlanguage so don't blame me lol i'm trying ( i do better then some americans :P)

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( i do better then some americans :P)

That says more about the Americans than about you

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At the age of three, smelling the rubber from a fresh burnout, a young child is turned into a “car nut”. This child, hearing the low and thunderous roar of a v8 engine, has a vision of his future. As a mechanic, he will work on cars to make them faster. He will spend hours at a time examining parts, consulting manuals, and working under dirty oil pans to find that extra tenth of a second.

For this child, getting a degree from a vocational school and securing a professional certification is the best route to getting the job. At the end of this long road he sees his ambitions of owning a shop, customizing and fixing cars realized. With a little hard work, he can set himself on the path of successful ventures within the automotive industry. Looking ahead, the child makes the choice to follow this dream. After high school, he will go to a vocational school and realize his dream.

It's a bit repetitive, don't you think

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That says more about the Americans than about you

yes, means that they are under enducated and don't speak normal english

hoowdy how fellas' <----- ??!!

Scrabby seems to have an odd idea of how America works.

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There are a few of us. :P

I try, but some days I just can't care enough to go through and remove my sentences that consist of 3.24 million commas.

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Scrabby seems to have an odd idea of how America works.

It's TV that gives you Americans a bad image