The editing would have been nice if you knew where to stop, and where to cut clips. I honestly tried to watch this through, but all the blinking and black and white glowing parts put me off, coupled together with some great shots where the car isn't in the picture, and I was forced to watch banners and walls... I just couldn't, sorry.
On the other hand, at least you tired using SFX which is cool, but PLEASE... LESS SFX, MORE FPS next time...