I do like the concept, very cool to have a lap commentary with a driver.
Your voice reminds me of WRC navigators. On a couple of those fast-paced in-out-in corners, you got quite excited, that really got me liking the vid.
While race lines could have been a bit cleaner, you did mention you are using an X360 controller - a wheel would be your best bet, but great paddle driving, nonetheless.
7/10, sir. Looking for more videos from you soon!