Ok, Im still pretty new of this subject, making LFS movies. So please give me comments of whats good and whats not good. It will help me in the future of making movies ...

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=Z00UM2DT

Uhm... I am new to this stuff too, but I guess
need more action, and I guess too much FOV doesnt make it look good...
anyway - not bad