but ive made a movie and its my first ever video

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Wh1j47zLHpE

any advice please ?

thankyou, come again

It was nicely done but awfully boring without sound and or music

Another frapsed replay. With no sound.

LMFAO, 15 fps, no Shift+F, ...

Advice is here clicky

Among other things, this is a great vid. Im happy you frapsed it and shown to us, since none of us actually owns LFS S2 license, and we wouldn't be able to watch the .spr file...