So i made a new movie i hope u will like it http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XITdPfSO-x8

i don't know how this usually happens, but it did with your video. Even though the video SEEMS to have all the necessary stuff like Custom cameras and MPR message block and so on,(watched a minute of the vid), it is quite dull and lifeless. I'd say you should improve your camerawork, film some better action, and pay more attention to small details

I didnt had more moments to record and my MPRS are so lagging... Yea my camera work is bad and i dont know how to record it smoothly...

some good original idea is needed...just "thousand-times-before-used" type of shots arent very interesting...maybe more effects would help and more dynamic camera ...static shots must be really interesting not to bore the watcher
and higher rate of changing shots will be better too I think