Hey,
I made a review video for a german league one week ago.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZepSxUIuEIc

I know the little mistakes like the chat messages at the beginning and the racing line seconds later. The bigger errors are more important for me. Which things can I improve in the next videos?

Kind regards,
Feuerdrache

Uhm, the fraps logo is disturbing imo. You should remove that, either by getting the full version of fraps or by cropping the window. Try to sync the clips to the music as well as lowering the FOV. Also there's some shots with low fps, fix that too. Other than those things it's a decent vid me thinks.