Nice job. Good idea for an introduction. Few mistakes, such as at 1:00. The camera blur effect glitches the border. Also, the lens flare effect afterwards is pretty cheesy. I'll be waiting for the full thing.
a bit too boring for me and a bit laggy but im not sure if it was the vid.
but on the other hand nice editing just a bit too slow for me (and the music nearly brought me to fall asleep :shy