Riding on a Formula one, FW31 race livery.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P-K0nDFOtfk

Enjoy!

Very nice and simple video.

At first it seems to be a camera's showcase lap with some good shoots, but then you've used the same cameras twice or even more. ( maybe changing angles or switch sides on that helmet/wheel camera ).
Another thing is that small noise on some of those video clips transitions.
Sometimes fraps or other image capture software can do that, ... sometimes is just your sound card, as well as video edition software and sometimes is when people press pause in lfs just before stop recording. You can correct that by cutting a tiny bit at the start and end of each video clip on the video editor.

Note: Sony vegas does that too sometimes when you mess around with alot video clips or use auto alignment, so make sure you zoom in your transitions and check for undesired spaces, that will result on that nasty sound effect.

Cheers...

I wasn't too blown away TBH. Over use of the "roll" feature, bad on-car (helmet view) camera, and stuff like that. Good concept, average execution.

Was surprised it wasn't with commentary this time. Anyway I agree with posts above, you are doing well, only some small things need to be fixed and it'd be much more watchable.