I quite enjoyed it, here's a few things that I thought could be better:
- Some of the drifting
- The camera's weren't very smooth sometimes
- The footage was a square shape, but you rendered the movie as wide screen
- Some of the effects were a bit corny, I didn't like the inverted colours part and the transitions like the folding blinds, were a bit...... Eww.
Overall it was quite good, in true Squid style I guess I'd give you a 6/10. Its definitely not failure, though.