that you have criticism on my renders is not a problem.
but do you want next time tell how it should be.
it is very easy to say what's wrong.
but tell what the solution is.
or give examples of how it should be.
everyone should learn, even me.
if it so easy then everyone did it, but this is not the case.
comment is well, here you learn from, but someone burning down is not the right way to help.