Well, I must say, this IS very very VERY impressive. I will not pinpoint exact moments where there were mistakes and such, because through the whole movie my jaw dropped so low down, that it stretched the skin on my face, forcing my eyes to close, so I didn't see any problems...
Allright, back to being me...
this took a hell lot of effort, I must say. Coordinating that crowd must have been a tedious task, and some of the scenes were really good (I really screamed "wooohohoo hooooo" once the UF1 flipped over it's bonnet)
The downsides of this movie are... well, there is one - you're not experienced with the camera and the editing, which is an understandable thing, knowing this is your first LFS movie (and make no mistake, making an LFS movie, not an LFS video is a VERY VERY hard thing to do, you've set your goals high, and you delivered formidable results)
My advice to you would be - try making some lfs videos, concentrating on camerawork and editing. Once you get the hang of using special effects, and picking only the best angles - you'll surely deliver solid gold movies.
Anyway, I believe I should admit - your city racing movie was way better than mine, just because of the pure effort you've put into it, and because of the scale, which is on a totally different level. Good job, a very very good job man.
Squid