Hello! Here's my short video and this was my first attempt to make lfs video so it's far from perfect and scene from SO (0:23-0:33) shouldn't be there because it's total failure, uploaded video and just then noticed that it's there. So I hope you'll like it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFsOFVL10YQ

Song: Robots In Disguise - Turn It Up

That scene made me laugh :P

Anyway, I can't drift at all, but your 'drifting' looks more like oversteer to me..

Thanks guys for not being 12 years old and telling what's wrong.

I'm just beginner so maybe in future I'll learn how to drift and not to oversteer

About vignette, I just added it from vegas effect list, it doesn't look so bad when watching vid in media player, just youtube adds it's black borders.

So anyway, thanks for advices, I'll try to improve myself in future

ooh. a fellow 12 year old. turn on shadowing next time and also try syncing the video to the audio. it might make your video shorter but it will make it much more pleasing to watch. also. it's not an excuse to be a 12 year old. (unless you are sure you haven't watched a lot of films here.) yeah. your vingetting effect is on overdrive. make it subtle so that it's barely noticeable.