whoops I missed that one... mwuahahahaha...
Anyway, even though it's your first ever video, it's completely....... ...good. Seriously, can't say a single bad thing about it, there were a few points that I was about to point and scream "BAD" but each time I was wrong, because of those were the interesting transitions used. Creative I must say.
I seriously don't know what happened, but probably you saw too many "READ THE TUTORIAL" replies to other people's videos, and read it before making your first
Here's a little tip however. When recording in MPR, make sure that before you hit rec button, and unpause the replay, all the cars you will film are already in the shot. If they're not, the cars that are driving INTO the shot will pop up from thin air due to lag.
Anyway - best first movie I've ever seen (better than Lynce's first, so you could actually do very good at LFS movie making :P )