The beginning was absolutely spoiled by awfuly coloured text flying over the screen. Also cars going though camera, quite a bit of lag, and losing all the epicness of the video right after the planet shot. Server messages should have been removed. The camerawork also becomes really average (I'd say weak, but you're using smooth enough custom cameras, so I can't) after the intro. The corny speed-training-rpm text layered over just finishes the movie off for me. Sorry, I can't watch 6 minutes of video with an epic intro hoping for it to become epic again.
It feels like the 2 movie makers made this, a talented one, and an novice one. The first guy did the first 40 seconds, the second one - everything else