Guys, I need feedback.

I am really pushing my Graphics coursework deadline. I am doing a promotional stand promoting the new "Zenovo ST1".

I had the stand ready ages ago, the only part that was left was the "graphics". Stupid school does not have photoshop, so I simply took the net home and said I will do it at home. However, we all know how it goes... "I'll do it tomorrow..."

Anyways. I have to get it done today, and I need feedback and opinions.

Please look at what I have done. The first pic is the front of the stand. The second is the back.

Thanks!

(Yes it does not really "promote" the car. But the stand will hold leaflets with more info about it)

Like the pictures but don't like the font tbh though im not a graphic designer

Leave it how it is, its nice and simple and refined.

Quote from pearcy_2k7 :

Like the pictures but don't like the font tbh though im not a graphic designer

Yeah, the front looks plain on the net, but thats because only the main body will be visible once its assembled. All the other sides will fold up.

5haz - Thanks. I will probably do that.

Could you possibly make a "prototype", like make a rough version from the net for us to see.

Hopefully I can take some pictures tomorrow. I need to print it on A3 and on card, which I can only do at school so.

But yeah sure, when I do, and if it works, I'll gladly show it.

"ZenvoAutomative.com" ? Is that the correct spelling?

From looking at the unfolder flat, I'm not sure how it fits together, though that may be the beer talking. I don't see how the front and back relate to each other in 3D; it looks like it won't be a full 3D form. That probably doesn't make sense, but.. beer.

I'm not too much a fan of the two side images on the back; the car is placed in an orientation that doesn't make sense, physically. Cars don't travel vertically (generally speaking, anyways) so I find that a little distracting. I'd use the same style font for the "Definition of Success" type that you've used for the rest of it to unify it. Sometimes you can get away with changing the font if the backing graphics pull it together, but as the background is all black this doesn't happen, I think.

I like the basic dramatic pictures on black background; it's very effective for this car.

Sorry if any of it sounds harsh, it's not intended to. Blame the beers.

Dang it! Thanks for that spelling error! Didnt notice it myself.

OK. The "back" in no way connects to the front when assembling. Because the net is 2D, I cannot see the back side of it... Therefore, my simple solution was to simply copy paste the net, do the graphics I want on the back, and when it comes to assembling it, cut it apart and glue it on.

It is a silly solution, but a great shortcut for me. I dont have time to redo the net.

I agree about the sides. However, I could not think of anything else I could do. There is no much space available, so any image is hard to fit in. Ideas more than welcome.

Thanks for constructive criticism.

In that case (with respect to the back side graphics) the final 3D version will have a sort of hollow back to it (It won't be fully boxed)? In that case, it seems to me that the back needn't have any graphics at all, as the intended viewer is going to be in front of it, as it wouldn't be a 360 degree viewable object.

That is, of course, if I'm understanding the net properly. I could be entirely wrong. LOL

Nice and simple as 5haz said. I like it.