I don't see the reason why sarcasm should be put into this. A guy shares his job. He is not a bad person and doesn't deserve to get this silly outburst.
Yeah, video has many problems: colors, the music out of context, poor camerawork. Instead of providing some tips (as long I see there are a several video editors commenting on this stuff), but no.
I really wouldn't like to be in his place. A person makes a video and gettin' into some kind of childish playground where everybody is just hanging around, joking. Please, stay your thoughts to yourself. We gathered here to make a constructive criticism in this particular case.
@bmwe30m3 - I recommend you:
1) lower the saturation and shadow tones - cos it's too sharp colors and the video itself is so dark.
2) use higher camera smoothness rate - it may help you control the camera more easily and nicely.
3) don't use dubstep (as long I do understand you like it) - but it requires a good skill at synchin' the video with an audio. It's a tough thing. You are an amateur and I would recommend you avoiding this at this time. Use not that dynamic and dramatic type of music. A proper song with not harsh or big transitions would be perfect at the start.
4) always re-watch the job you've done before publishing this - in this case, you see - the video end at 2:05 and blank black screen lasts till the end for around 40 seconds. It's bad thing. Pay more attention.
