Not bad, but just one thing, if you used picture in picture (the main picture being the clip of the video on the inside, in the drivers seat or not; and the smaller picture being the clip of the outside view), that would have helped you (instead of repeating the same part twice).
Well,good idea,for my next videos or something,it started like this experimental video,may grow to my personal Drift school and/or video magazine! Need to work on the editing,and need to play a bit with Fraps setup,andyway,nice to see some feedback.
Cheers!