Im still on editing bad, but i hope you enjoyed

Your editing isn't bad - quite good, imo. The problem is that there's no 'story'. I don't mean a literal story, but I think a good clip needs to come to a conclusion of some sort. You have a really good start, a nice middle, but the end just seems unfinished.

Your editing style is shaping up nicely - I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.