Quote from S0ul :

please explain what exacty is ooo poor about it so i can improve for the next time...its just my first movie so im gonna learn.

One word - resolution.
It is even hard to watch it, of such low resolution this movie is.

Yeah,i think i used a wrong codec...if that is all you can criticise im happy

Quote from S0ul :

if that is all you can criticise im happy

Mainly becuase as I have said before, I get pissed off when trying to watch low resolution movies and because of that I probably don't notice anything else.

Ill try to find a better codec in the next few days,if i found another one,maybe you can watch the video and criticise something else but resolution...till then
S0ul

The ideas on where to use cameras was generally right, but it's not fluid at all, and graphic quality is poor.

Need lot of improvemement, but it's on the right way