well, I watched it....
all I have to say is first time never is good...
I have seen a lot of a BL rev drift videos taken from a standart replay mode...
and they all blend in to one....
now, all you have to do is
1) switch camera to Shift+U mode for better angles
2) switch screen to Shift+F mode to remove HUD
3) make a skin to make the car stand out...
4) add patience, and save all replays that could have been a material for a video.
5) increase the quality (see making LFS videos thread)
good luck