I find the video itself quite a mixture of very good and bad.
Excellent editing, nice (though too long) intro, good effects. However, this does not make up imo for the somewhat confusing content. The movie title doesn't make things easier either.
I don't get the part in the city, was that supposed to be how the car gets out from the city to the track? The end is also confusing, you do show quite a lot of FZ which is the strongest part of the video, and all of a suddent GTRs come by. Ok, nothing wrong with that, but then the next moment there comes the TBO class. If this was supposed to be an overall racing movie, no problem with that either. But the long focus on the fz, and then this confusing end... weird, very weird! Also, if you do a long intro, you might want to do a proper ending as well. The ending was cut off all of a sudden as if the camera crew ran out of power or something. I also didn't get why you showed credits all of a sudden in the middle of the movie when cars were moving slow. You were building up the movie, and all of a sudden in the middle it slows down and credits, song titles etc appear...
You certainly have very good editing skills, and this video had a great potential, but the "plot" was so bad and confusing, that it kind of ruins the video. There is no clear message what this movie is supposed to be about...
Imo, you should have cut the intro to 1/2, and then show only FZ. That would have been truly perfect, and would match the title as well! Now it looks like 2-3 seperate videos glued together.