My pc is old and slow so my FPS sucks, especialy on multiplayer but i really wanted to show a video of me in the FZ5 as a tester, chucked a random MP replay on the end as well, which could have been better, but yea, here it is, did try fraps but it freezes my PC.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJOqNw_vd88

Pretty good going, the tyres of the first car are a little bit smokey but you're going nice !!

Ok video.
Something like 5/10.

You need to use more camera veiws, and maybe edit it something.
Like I have said to drift movies before - there are so many of them now, that they need to show us eighter something new, or they have to be good editied and made to catch interess by people

Well, I'm crap at editing so will try the something new, thank you for the replys

As long as you take the constructive crtitism, and work with it and get experience, then you are going to improve.
Keep that in mind when you work with the videos.
You have much you can improve, but you have a good strating point (this video), so just work around, get experience, try adding some new stuff, and then it sure will be a great movie!