Hello, everybody,

We've made a new race team. It's just for the fun and we race at the Oval with the BF1. we are often at the Oval Junkies and we use Ventrilo from fragmaster voice chat.
So if you are intressed in our team and you want to join!!??

Go to our website...www.euro-r.tk and go to join us...

greeting matrixx

Go to www.euro-r.tk for more info.....please check!!!

greetings Matrixx

go to www.euro-r.tk and join our team ...make it stronger!!!

greetings Matrixx

Good luck with the team but posted in the wrong tread

Quote from rayrz :

go to www.euro-r.tk and join our team ...make it stronger!!!

greetings Matrixx

coooool

good luck

Shall i help you with the English?, its a bit...you know.

Full English, Corrected Grammar

Welcome

Already posted in another section. Dont cross post pls. [/mod hat]

Quote from harjun :

At the moment, this team has just been built, but is hoping to have high expectations,
so if you would like to join us and to be member.

Although I am not from any English speaking country, I would say that there are still some mistakes in the last sentence (concerning both grammar and logic). Correct me if I'm wrong.

Quote from breadfan :

Correct me if I'm wrong.

You're not wrong. This is Harjun we're talking about tohugh, so no surprises there.

Quote from The Moose :

You're not wrong. This is Harjun we're talking about tohugh, so no surprises there.

lol, indeed.

Quote from Jakg :

Bolded bits are corrected by someone who's actually passed GCSE English (somehow with a B).

Still not all that great. I'll have a go at it.

Quote :

Welcome to the Euro-R Racing Team website.

We mostly drive the BF1 on the Kyoto Oval track (KY1) and you can often find us on the "[FM] Oval Junkies" server. This team has only just been created, but I have high expectations for it. So, if you are interested in becoming a member, just click "Join Us."

It's so sad that it took someone from a country that completely wrecked the English language to get it right

Nice one DWB, Job done.

Quote from The Moose :

It's so sad that it took someone from a country that completely wrecked the English language to get it right

Heyyyy!

merged threads and placed in Team section. Please try to keep it to one thread

Good luck with the team.

Yeah, that's more better now.

Good luck with the team!

I hope its going to be a succesfull one!

hey, i saw that you reponse on it.....thanks for the big help!!!! My english is not really good, but im trying, thanks for the spelling!!!

greeting matrixx

thx for the help...i update the website....do you got more idea's????

greeting Matrixx(Rayrz)

Quote from rayrz :

thx for the help...i update the website....do you got more idea's????

greeting Matrixx(Rayrz)

Thanks for the help, i updated the website, do you guys have any more ideas?

Yep,...., add some more pictures, make the website look more attractive, ie. colours...pics of cars, etc.

and change the font, times new roman, is MINGING

Quote from harjun :

Yep,...., add some more pictures, make the website look more attractive, ie. colours...pics of cars, etc.

and change the font, times new roman, is MINGING

Yes, you should add some more pictures. You should make the website look more attractive, ie. use attractive colours and have pictures of cars, etc.

Also, change the font, Times New Roman is not very attractive

Quote from niall09 :

Yes, you should add some more pictures. You should make the website look more attractive, ie. use attractive colours and have pictures of cars, etc.

Also, change the font, Times New Roman is not very attractive

lol (Though there should be a full stop after font, not a comma:razz

hah, i love, to, so, grammatical, stuff. Is confusing. i like. it though

so you can correct me even?

It is correct Jakg.. but..

"This team has only just been created, but I have high expectations for the team,"

Would be better as...

"This team has only just been created and I have high expectations for it"

Too many commas, and used the phrase "the team" twice in the same sentance... My version sounds much better

Quote from DANDAMAN05 :

It is correct Jakg.. but..

"This team has only just been created, but I have high expectations for the team,"

Would be better as...

"This team has only just been created and I have high expectations for it"

Too many commas, and used the phrase "the team" twice in the same sentance... My version sounds much better

YEP!