Had good time watching it
What I'd still like to see is more structured beginning of the broadcast, it feels like I've missed all the "before the race" stuff and the race is just about to start. I have a basic structure here which could be usable for this:
1) a proper introduction of yourselves and STCC.
2) tell what has happened since last race and were there any points taken away and was the finishing order changed because of steward decisions.
3) What race is it now, where is it and how many races there have already been. To save film, you could show the scenery at the background, helicopter views etc...
3.5) onboard lap around the track, guided by the technical commentator. To let the viewers see the track. Give information about passing and braking points, kinda like summing up what kind of track it is
4) show the championships points table and let the technical commentator give his opinion on it
4.5) speculate the race (tires, cars, etc.)
4.6) Commercial break. The commentators make it clear that the race follows right after the advert.
6) show the CTRA ad here, before the start
6) the race
7) the aftermath, maybe show a podium, best lap times and points earned. Tell a bit about the next race.
Try to create a relaxed atmosphere before the race. After the "advert" you kinda could come back and start the race. It feels a bit like the race is going to start just in a second.
The interview with samh didn't imho work and it was a bit strange to see the interview while he was supposed to be sitting in the car. Maybe it would have worked better after the race, or without the video; using just the audio.
All this is meant constructive and I really liked the show. I hope it keeps improving
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