bah litle movie i made on my boring time and its my second movie no special effect ,nothing so dont execpt mutch

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-RbgQvd1Bs

baaah, good enough to be worth watching
massive amount of places you need to work on
6.5/10

Try using less FOV

High FOV may look cool to you on your high ress 3d rendered image that the LFS creates on your screen but when you have to make your viewers pay attention to what you want to show them, if it is something specific and not generally a view, you have to get rid of any unnecessary scenery by narrowing the Field of view.

Look at my Hachi drifting! Nice vid

Quote from kaynd :

Try using less FOV

High FOV may look cool to you on your high ress 3d rendered image that the LFS creates on your screen but when you have to make your viewers pay attention to what you want to show them, if it is something specific and not generally a view, you have to get rid of any unnecessary scenery by narrowing the Field of view.

I'm with you on this one, that was the big problem with this video. I also suggest shorten the scenes a little bit. A lot of times your looking at a track image, then after a few seconds a car comes. I think you've got a few nice shots in the video though. 6.5/10

Nice