here a render

ps: daloonie's BodyKit

Quote from chrisTHEgunner :

here a render

ps: daloonie's BodyKit

Great design, but i think it would look better if the black section at the front was just below the lights and not through them, if you know what i mean.

Render = bad idea when showing off WIPs

Why you ask?
Well, it doesn't show what it looks like in LFS, LFS uses its own lighting, and I see you have some "body mods" in the skin, and they look weird in the render.

A printscreen from the CMX viewer would suffice.

(just FYI)

Otherwise, skin looks good, simple and clean.

here the screenshots



PS: sorry my bad engl......my german is better

I don't like the grid, its a really clean design without it. It needs logos and stuff and don't forget to take daloonie's name off the back (unless ur a really big fan of him or something) make sure to credit him tho