1) FPS are so low, you can get a calculator to run LFS smoother (record at .125 and then speed up 8 times in editor)
2) Gamecam watermark is HUGE - fraps works better
3) it's very creative to block the view with a white figure from 42 to 47 seconds, unfortunately - it looks bad
4) in car views look bad if you don't give them "this is really what the driver sees" effect...
5) jerky camera
6) whoopie, burnouts in a drift video... master class driving
7) a hell lot of high fov moments... high fov looks bad
8) 3:55 XRT doing a burnout by sticking its front bumper into the wall... now THAT, has just made the whole team.... look like they have no idea about what "driving" is...
NOW
1) learn to drive properly to show you are not a bunch of noobs for a video, even if it means having no fun (I still don't know what the fun is in donuts and burnouts with the help of the wall, but meh, I don't care)
2) if youre going to overlay the video with something - make sure it fits the style of the video, and make sure that the video is sill visible
3) read the tutorial on movie making which is a sticky here to improve almost at all the problematic things you are having
verdict - unwatchable (Sad, it could be a lot better)