You need to keep focus on one subject, you kept going back to the FBM at the beginning, even for a second you went back to it, and continued using that same camera angle for a long time not showing .. really anything.
I did like the camera angle of the BMW skinned FBM looking at the driver watching the guy pass him on the right, but jumping back and forth between the GTRs and the FBM and all the crashes really set it off, especially the random LX6 jump in the middle where you clearly see the main car go into the wall but is cutoff first and jumps back to the GTRs or an FBM.......
Also when you use external cameras that you use, set it so that there are no G forces on it, making it a "stiff" camera, rather than budge around like it did, because that was really bad looking.
The angle on the mirror with the car in the mirror was cool, except that you cut off the door panel and could see the dash etc inside the car!
Not bad for a 2nd movie, but you really need to get a focus on one subject.