1. Intro of twin donuts goes on too long, 30 secs is way too much.
2. One camera position for half the movie also gets a little stale.
3. Try to keep the car in the whole frame when following.
Apart from that, its ok. I wont comment on the drifting part cos I'm no expert. Also, try and sync it up with the music. Dramatically adds more to the movie doing this.