After re-reading my post, I felt like I have to explain, I sounded maybe a bit too harsh (and I wasn't really constructive either
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First of all, it really isn't bad at all, although I might gave the impression I wouldn't like it...
White, plain font on black might be a wrong choice, it somehow disturbs the "flow", maybe put a background behind it (like a screenshot or even put it over the real life videos)...
Then, you claim LfS to be the new reference (or standard) of sim-racing... But from watching this video, I honestly wouldn't know what makes LfS so outstanding, the scenes could be from any other car racing game... Show the features of LfS: Show tire flexing, show suspension working real-time, show what happens if someone brakes too hard, show flat tires, two-wheel "acrobatics", show how difficult it is to keep the car on the track (maybe not too much, but people expect sims to be a little difficult)...[When I tell somebody about Live for Speed, first I mention "Just racing" by kraniwani and if he gets interested, I show him "Run Riot" by SchneeFee just to make clear that this is a simulation, thus it isn't sunshine all the time...]
Maybe grab some ideas from other movies, like the long side-by-side from "Just racing" or "Fear" (if I remember correctly, the first movie that shown a battle through the Aston chicane in one big scene)...
And please don't take my posts as an insult, I would love to be able to make such a movie, which I am not... I just want to see LfS shine, if it's on TV once (again)...