I must say this is one of the best first movies I have ever seen. You seem to have the "feel" of the camera controls, and the basic editing skills. In time you will make great progress. My complaint however is : 1 I don't like the music. 2. The video isn't syncronised to the music.
other than that : a very very good effort, with a worthy result. (I wish some people were able to do that kind of quality on their 10th movie)
Well this isnt my first vid, I have made a couple more. Wich you can see in my profile over at that web link were I gave you guys. I'm going to try and make some more, and try to synchronize everything more to the music. Thanks squid for the comment.