Use a much, much lower FoV (more zoom) and typically for slow-mo I would put the camera a little closer to the ground. Not a bad first though, it just takes some time.
Well the MPR message block should be on all the time, even if there's only one message appearing in the video - it spoils it.
There's just WAY TOO MUCH FOV especially for a slow motion vid
Verve - Bitter Sweet symphony was used in every 2nd slo-mo vid (and every other vid uses Requiem for a dream OST)
Never use the standard "behind the wheel" camera
Never "look left" or "look right" in the video
The aspect ratio is very wrong
Regular cameras are bad. Use Shift+u
3 minutes in to the movie, I'm turning it off now...It's too boring even for my maniacal will to bash this vid...get some proper action at least next time