i dont know who make layout my friend send me and we use sorry for bad effects its my first video.i wait comments.

2 black striped car is my friend.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=I_MkdrSrZ9Q

Surprisingly good for a first video. You really need to fix that aspect ratio problem, the resolution was all wrong. Other than that I would use a little more zoom and record at a slower pace and you'd be in business. Nice work. 8.5/10 For a first!

good start .
tips:
-a bit blury
-a bit too thin on sides. (increase resolution of movie and/or offer a high res link
-block messages(MPR block in config file)
-try to avoid multiplayer incar views if possible (steering wheel looks laggy).
-some shots have to much FOV(field of view)
-and if using a camera attached to the car, make sure that real guages and mirrors are turned on.

Quote from Zachary Zoomy :

good start .
tips:
-a bit blury
-a bit too thin on sides. (increase resolution of movie and/or offer a high res link
-block messages(MPR block in config file)
-try to avoid multiplayer incar views if possible (steering wheel looks laggy).
-some shots have to much FOV(field of view)
-and if using a camera attached to the car, make sure that real guages and mirrors are turned on.

thanks for tips and i learn adobe premiere now.i edit this video ulead video studio 10 and its bad only copy paste

Whats the name of that song?

You need to work on the resolution cause it's very blurry. I'm suprised, not bad for a 1st movie...You'll impove for sure

Like everyone else has said really, the aspect ratio is a bit hmmm, iffy.

And the song (The Prodigy - Voodoo People, which was on the Maximum Bass 2 CD, not sure who mixed it), WTF was the god awful mix in the middle? Completely killed a decent song as it just made the whole thing sound distorted.

7.5/10 - Fix the song and the aspect ratio and I may bump the score up a little bit.

cameras need smoothing
cameras need more variety in their positions
action has to be less laggy
ending the video should be done smoothly
starting too
aspect ratio is weird
and just look at what kind of music you added

Prodigy - Voodoo people Remixed by Pendulum (which is nice) and then remixed by some third class DJ by adding distortion and a second track at the background which made the good track sound like manure...

My advice - remix is cool, remix of the remix is not

thanks for all comments.I make a better video next time thanks

The drifts are good.

But the raito is kinda weird.

Also always add cutaway's from differnt angles n such.

Just keep at it and practice/ play around withit.