Using Vegas (?) effects is okay once or twice in the movie to give it a more
YUSSUFpro look. However, you overdid the silly effects and, bar the clichéd picture-in-picture panel at 2 minutes (which, completely by accident I suppose, actually fits with the music), none of makes much sense. I'm afraid your video isn't
YUSSUFpro yet.
To get a really
YUSSUFpro video, always use as much graphical detail as your computer allows you to. You are not racing online, just capturing a replay so, most of times, you'll be able to have higher detail when 'filming'. Access those options through the ESC -> Options -> Graphics menu, and try to set at least the Antialiasing options to max. Make sure you have also selected to use full high-resolution textures and shadings.
Another
YUSSUFpro tip is to make all the on-screen information (HUD, Flags Info, Driver Names
et cetera) invisible. In order to accomplish that, before you start to shoot your movie, press Shift+F once, to disable everything but the replay line at the bottom. Press it again to make it invisible as well.
Ah, yes. If you really want to be a
YUSSUFpro movie maker, you have to use customized camera views. You can position your new camera wherever you want simply by pressing Shift+U to access the layout/custom camera view and fiddling with its settings. Always use several angles/heights. Do not be restricted to only one camera position. You'll have to record dozens of takes separely this way, but it's the only way to success and
YUSSUFproness.
For more detail on how you make a movie using LFS, visit
http://en.lfsmanual.net/wiki/Movie_Tutorial
Best wishes, and I sincerely hope you've fixed your erotic problems by now.
Yuri.