I'm really critical in Driftmovies, I always saw very few of them which are good.
The Soundtrack was okay for me, until the singer was talking some lyrics there. Wasn't really appropriate imo.
Always be careful with those standart effects of SonyVegas, some of them are just monotonous.
Also the colour correction was abit too rough. You can play with it, but be delicately with it, especially with the contrast.
It would be better if you use fading instead of animating the logos and fonts.
Doing some cool animation with fonts isn't very easy, I also have some problems with it.
But it was quite okay for the first time.
Sorry for beating you! :P