Dude, I see a potential in you. You really feel an atmosphere. The only thing you need to do is to capture a shots more precisely. The standart, steady camerawork in the majority of the video is OK (not really as exciting as various close up and etc cameras, but it's OK. Better to use standart camerawork than do unprofessional work with a camera). An advice: increase a camera movement smoothness a little bit to make angle rotation not so sharp.
I liked a colors, synchronization which was pretty simple, but well done and no distractions with fast shots and etc and, of course, a music that fits perfectly. I wish you all the best with your upcoming projects. Looking forward. Cheers.