Hm... post production is pretty OK, but the plot is totally unclear and messed up. I mean I don't get it what message you want to send us with this video? At first, I was like "oh, ok, it's some kind of race review video", but then FZR appears, and don't get what is its role, also at the end that fly over the layout?! What was that?
I would like to congratulate with an effort in making LFS video cinematic. It's a very big plus from me. You have an intention to tell a story and technically you are doing it pretty good (I really liked that variety of camera angles, and especially the very last one when fzr drives off). I encourage you trying advanced use of camera to enforce the impression.
"Racing is not for everybody, and some people can't accept loosing. Friction between two longtime rivals manifests in this short montage. "
That's what I find in the description below the video. Well, ok... At first, it's not a really good and worth topic to be used for a video project. I mean, a negativity is not a right for you and for the audience to experience. Nobody bothers facing negative moments, such as intentional crashes and etc. If your concern is about people's behavior on the track and you want to moralize the audience, then I should say: a clever guy already knows it's rubbish thing, a dork one ignore it and won't learn from it.