Well, the beginning promised something nice, but in the end, it leaves a lot to be desired like
1. Better camerawork - the one you have now is unintentionally chaotic, and doesn't use enough smoothing
2. Better editing - you could syncronise the cuts to the music, but you didn't, which took a lot out of the video
3. Better special effects use - the glow/blur transitions get repetetive very soon
this is as basic as it can get, and needs more effort to be put into it.