I'm not so good at making movies.. but I do know one thing; The movie should be made so that the audience can watch it without getting pain in their eyes.
I watched 2 minutes of that, after that I gave up.
You failed. x)
Just regular criticism:
The music was good, this is a matter of taste ofc. The camera work was good the 2 minutes I watched, but try some different angles sometimes. In-car view, static camera at some corner, etc. Also, I noticed that the camera was going through the fence once, try not to do that. That goes with cars as well. And the most important thing: Make your next video slightly brighter so it doesn't hurt the eyes when you watch it. :]
5/10.