The online racing simulator
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#1 - C40Z
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I'm not so good at making movies.. but I do know one thing; The movie should be made so that the audience can watch it without getting pain in their eyes.
I watched 2 minutes of that, after that I gave up.

You failed. x)

Just regular criticism:
The music was good, this is a matter of taste ofc. The camera work was good the 2 minutes I watched, but try some different angles sometimes. In-car view, static camera at some corner, etc. Also, I noticed that the camera was going through the fence once, try not to do that. That goes with cars as well. And the most important thing: Make your next video slightly brighter so it doesn't hurt the eyes when you watch it. :]

5/10.
#3 - aoun
The movie was very well made, just didnt have a good variety or action. And the darkness was good to a poiint where it was "ok taake it off"!

Overall 7/10 =).. i still pretty much liked it..
cameraman have a shorter left leg or something?

it'd be nice if it leveled off at some point, but now i have a crick in my neck from having to tilt my head :/
I agree 100%
Em, first 10 seconds were interesting. then, stereotype came... 6/10
#7 - C40Z
thx for the constructive criticism guys but i love to watch replays and film it as a oneliner video. and i know its like noob stuff and not a special video it was just fun for me to make this video...here is an another movie from me with some different camera angles and more action click here

greetz caoz
#8 - SamH
Awesome oneliner! And I think the music is fantastic!

Of course, as a oneliner, it shouldn't have more action than it already has. It's a oneliner! LOL! Like complaining that an action movie didn't focus enough on the romance storyline

You have really good camera control. I struggle where you excel!
that was really good, i need to get used to fast moving camera work, maybe in my next project

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