Maybe it's just me...
I don't have a problem reading his posts. When you read for content and not for grammar, its really not that difficult.
Ignore them, dude. For the most part, the people who constantly complain about other people's grammar have little or no information to offer, but feel the need to post anyway.
As for your problem. I'm slow too. There are 2 things to do. 1, get a good -moderate- setup. Go to the setup field (
http://setupfield.teaminferno.hu/) and get a decent setup. If there are multiple setups for the track/car combo, get all of them and run 10-15 laps a piece on them, find which ones agree with you. If you can't find a good on on the track/car you need, look for similar tracks (ie, different configs of the same track) and try those. Find something that "feels" faster to you, but you can still control.
Work on nothing but going as fast as you can, and staying on the track. Be -strict- and make yourself return to its every time you go off track or brush a wall...even a little damage can make things a lot harder, plus, it makes you not want to go off track and have to reset so often.
Once you feel like you're running decent laps, then start tweaking your line. Basically, use every bit of track you can. Lets say you have a wide righthand hairpin.
You want to be all the way to the left before the turn, at some tracks even a little bit on the rumble strips if they aren't too harsh. Get on the brakes in a straight line. Start turning and letting off of the brakes at the same time (if you carry a good amount of brakes through a corner, you will push, since all of the cars weight will be forward...avoid turning while heavy on the brakes..). You when you turn, look ahead and aim for the apex. You want to clip the apex curbs at most tracks a little. This 1) forces you to be in the right place and 2) can actually help to turn the car a little more. By the time your at the apex you should be completely off of the brakes and easing on the gas. Now, keeping the wheel somewhat constant for the next few moments, "steer" with the gas. You want to be on the gas as much as you can be without spinning, or going off course. You can use the amount of gas to help determine your line out of the corner. You should aim to get your outside tires on the the rumble strips. Then just keep it in the gas and get to the next corner, and do it all over again.
It takes time to learn corners and courses. What makes it harder in LFS, is that different track configs means that your braking point for the same corner can be different for each config...but thats what makes it challenging. For me, it seems to take around 50-60 laps at a track before I can even get to a speed that gets me finishing on the lead lap online most of the time.
Lastly, have fun with it. It may be a racing game, but its not about winning all the time. I rarely win, but I have tons of fun with the game. And, unless your in a pack of cars, race your own race. For the most part, in a race, I'm hotlapping. There are other cars on the track, but I'm not paying them no mind, just running my own race (untill i catch one, or need to let one pass)