how to start...I didnt like the movie very much...there were few things that you should change/improve
- dont use too many different effects when changing one shot to another one...and IMO blurring, glooming and flashing effects are better than those you used
- in some shots the FBMs were too small and considering the quality they were just moving bunch of pixels
- those 1-2second black screens also didnt improve the quality of the video
- dont let cars go through the camera
but the shot I really liked (yes there was one) was the FBM spinning... (1:30) the shot wasnt anyhow special but it seemed to be kinda professional
but considering it was your first "big" movie it wasnt the worst start and as it was said before you have some feeling for doing videos so try harder...improve it and next time you will do it better
BTW: is that how it looks like in demo now? you CLICK CLICK on right mouse button (brake) in first turn of the race and you get big BOOM from behind?