In what manner exactly did you find it less appealing? I have a lot less close-ups on this one than I normally do, so I'm guessing that's it. I'd would like to know specifically what you think is lacking though, because I'm not 100% sure what it is.
I don't have a problem with speeding the playback up, but, I would have tried other ways to create the effect, as Squid says. The main thing I disliked about the fast playback was the fact that it never changed. It was like watching a 2.000 replay for almost 3 minutes. There should be a speed change in there, or at least a more subtle playback speed. Still like the video, nice work.
I think that has a better overall video tempo and action but the camera angles are not even in the LFSDrift.net video's league. To add to that, I have to agree with Lynce...
It appears that file front deleted those files due to inactivity. I'm going to see if I can host else where, if not I'll upload them tonight or tomorrow.