I have to agree with Lynce on this one. The story worked out really well, and there where some good real life car sounds in there. The editing did look slightly rushed however. The scenes had far to much red in them, the camera work was up and down all the time, and some of the image overlays were way off. But it's still a great movie. The thing I like about squid's vids is that they tell a story, and that's what makes them so good. If you could improve your quality just a bit, you'd be one of the best video makers working right now.