I can see the timeline in the video, you also are using pre-set cameras, and the first shot of your video quotes TZ's by now legendary video 1 to 1, which is bad. You overuse on weak special effects that don't add anything to the experience, HUD and Server messages are still present, you show 1 bit that was done by luck a few times from different angles like it's a miracle skill, low FPS, cars going though cameras, zero sync to the music, cheap text overlay (with what looks like an offer of a blowjob at that, which is stupid), and absolutely no sound editing, not even a fade out/in.
All in all, a very weak video